The editing is a little rough between shot there is a noticeable jump which is distracting. The audio is also hard to hear, could have used better audio equipment. Also could have used a lot more B-roll. The story is entertaining though and nice framing.
It is nice to hear about life through a different perspective of age, but I wish you focused on a more concrete theme instead of her personal life. On the other hand she is extremely entertaining to listen to.
I think that some b-roll would've been nice, aside from the still photographs. Maybe interactions with the family. I think she was very funny and even though it was short, and simple, it was also very enjoyable.
Your grandma is a great interviewee personality! Very funny. You had a good start with some pictures used for b-roll. I would of liked to maybe see her using facebook.
I think that you picked a very good subject. She was very engaging and added a lot of personality to the piece. I think there could have been more b-roll, but i think that the piece was very well done.
The editing is a little rough between shot there is a noticeable jump which is distracting. The audio is also hard to hear, could have used better audio equipment. Also could have used a lot more B-roll.
ReplyDeleteThe story is entertaining though and nice framing.
It is nice to hear about life through a different perspective of age, but I wish you focused on a more concrete theme instead of her personal life. On the other hand she is extremely entertaining to listen to.
ReplyDeleteYour grandma is hilarious and it was a good interview, but I would've liked to see more B roll.
ReplyDelete1. Hilarious 2. needs more b-roll and fixed audio..but entertaining.
ReplyDeleteI think that some b-roll would've been nice, aside from the still photographs. Maybe interactions with the family. I think she was very funny and even though it was short, and simple, it was also very enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteAudio could have been better, but your grandma was really funny and it was entertaining to listen to.
ReplyDeleteYour grandma is a great interviewee personality! Very funny. You had a good start with some pictures used for b-roll. I would of liked to maybe see her using facebook.
ReplyDeleteI think that you picked a very good subject. She was very engaging and added a lot of personality to the piece. I think there could have been more b-roll, but i think that the piece was very well done.
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